Let's See Where We Go

A poem about my past relationship

Ill never forget her face

Staring into those beautiful brown eyes

Together we would spend our days

Talking about how we would share our lives

We spent every possible minute together

Talking about how we would be forever

She was all I ever wanted, my beautiful treasure

Always there to help me maintain my center

I miss her to this day

I can't get her outta my head

I was so sure she would be my fiancé

But this was a relationship I greatly misread

I gave her everything I had to give

But was stabbed with deceit and lies

Caught her with another guy, she had on quite a disguise

Our relationships demise came as quite a surprise

Learned some cruel life lessons

But still had so many unanswered questions

The pain and hurt was not going to lessen

So we broke up and went our separate routes

Ever since then I've been like a recluse

Using this relationship as a sad excuse

To not date or let another woman in again

I'm done with freight train weights of pain

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Just a spur of the moment poem, just wanted to get something written.

Reviews

[char]

Spur of the moment usually produces awesome poems :)
But, "fiancé" implies a dude to be married. So unless....just kidding. Here's a trick I use: "female" has two 'e's right? So that would be "fiancée"; the word "male" has one 'e', so that would be "fiancé". Easy, right? :D

[SW..if..TY]

ohhhhhhhh I did not know that! haha thank you for the tip! :)

[char]

I use to make that mistake all the time, so it's all good :)

[Livin'todieCS]

AMAZING!

[Zap-the-awesome]

That was pretty good. Keep up good work!!

[SW..if..TY]

thank you!