Minimalism can be deep, as you've presented here. Well done Halie O'Harriet. Kudos.
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Noting title; Devil's Marker.
One tends to surmise him to be the perpetrator.
You employ first person pronouns in each line.
Yet as you state in responding comment to LE Berry; this poem means a lot to me. Even with a little amount of words, this text speaks volumes in my mind.
I hear your volumes also.
This is you talking to you, that's a (Good Thing).
All poets do this through their writing.
Interpretation:
Your soul is bleeding too, and it is not in agreement with your ego.
Minimalism can be deep, as you've presented here. Well done Halie O'Harriet. Kudos.
Analytics:
Noting title; Devil's Marker.
One tends to surmise him to be the perpetrator.
You employ first person pronouns in each line.
Yet as you state in responding comment to LE Berry; this poem means a lot to me. Even with a little amount of words, this text speaks volumes in my mind.
I hear your volumes also.
This is you talking to you, that's a (Good Thing).
All poets do this through their writing.
Interpretation:
Your soul is bleeding too, and it is not in agreement with your ego.
a cutter... damn, still feel THAT shivershake. And yes THAT came to my mind FIRST reading. And while the thought flow could encompass so very many flows ...sigh... first impressions DO grab and hold.
I love this tightly descriptive poem which to me defines all types of violence. Very nicely written Halie O'Harriet
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Thank you, this poem means a lot to me. Even with a little amount of words, this text speaks volumes.. read moreThank you, this poem means a lot to me. Even with a little amount of words, this text speaks volumes in my mind.
Someone who writes from the dark of their heart.
Only 16, but my mind is older.
My focus falls in poetry and young adult fiction!
Father of "The Truth May be Painful" on Amazon!
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