Everything

A quick poem for the man I love.

You cut through darkness so thick,

At times,

I could barely see.

You found laughter,

When I thought I never would.

You instilled hope,

When after so many years I had found it abandoned.

 

The torch that lights my path through darkest hours,

The wind when I feel so numb.

My warmth in the coldest of places,

My shelter from the storm.

My peace of mind.

 

My life

My love

My confidant.

 

You’re my everything

And more.

Reviews

[xxx]

I love poems that end in "and more." I don't know why, but that is probably my favorite phrase in the entire English language. I love that you didn't have any set structure for this one. Cutsy love poems aren't really my thing, but you portrayed your point well without being overboard lovey dovey. I liked it.

[LochnezzMonster]

smooth, really smooth. I like the second stanza, it's my favorite because it elaborates more with a wirl-wind of awesome visual. Then the ending is very Dramatic in a good way! You want to hold the reader. And by spacing out the sentences you make the words blunt and emotional.