Mine even though

I won't beg, but I won't ever stop, so please love me too.

I can't think of

a moment where

you weren't at my side

And if there was

then I'll be there

and you'll be right beside

We're more than

friends I'm sure you know

we're more than just a pair

I want your heart

your mind, your soul

I think that's only fair

Don't run from me

don't dodge, don't hide

It's just a waste of time

I already have you

you're already mines

I even sat and rhymed!

don't be a fool

you have no choice!

I'm the only one for you

Come on just say it

and use your voice

and say you love me, too.

Author's Note

https://voca.ro/15Feyq3LUsTD

Another perspective at one-sided love, and the possession that comes with it, I tend to ignore rhyming makes it seem childish, but I feel it fit the theme here, let me know what you think!

Reviews

[maya_online]

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[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

i loved the rhyming in this poem, it really carried it. your notes add a bit more context to this work -- maybe this isn't just a sappy love poem, but something a bit more edgy. but however you interpret it, the text works. very well written and full of rhythm. it pops, rocks, and rolls.

[maya_online]

I love seeing your reviews, Ern! One-sided love is always painful, but it can be painful for different reasons, such as they won't leave you alone, thank you for your review!

[TaraNicole]

Sounds like best friends at a pivotal point. Funny I found and read this considering I myself am in a somewhat similar situation lol.. I love the lightheartedness in which it feels like this was penned. Good job!

[maya_online]

I think rhyming can give any type of writing a sense of airiness, I appreciate your comment and hope whatever situation you are in only ends up going well!

[emmajoygreen]

Welcome and thank yous for sharing so much delight and emotion about that very special person!

You speak for quite a few who have felt, do feel or will.. There's a purr at the thought of.. there's a smile at the knowledge or - there is - everything!

'don't be a fool
you have no choice!
I'm the only one for you'

[maya_online]

Thank you, Emma! I really do enjoy that bit of the poem, one thing I love is when you can hear a writing and how it sounds, and that line is one I feel everyone can...hear, if that makes sense!

[emmajoygreen]

Yes, it does make sense. A write can visualise a thought and then - as if by magic, make it come true?!

[TaraNicole]

Manifestation is exactly that

[Antifranticbabydoll]

Reminds me of old writing I used to do, it's a good story, I can feel that you love this person and want to be with them in their wonderfulness. Keep writing.

[maya_online]

Thank you so much! I feel the hardest thing to convey is love, so hearing this is really good!

[Jeyanthi]

The love expressed finely...
It does sound like possession...
Possession, they will do anything to keep them beside and also doubt and get anger.. a type of mixed emotions...

But the way you used to tell by poem... ( u can insert a beautiful memory inside of one santza to make not sound arrogance...)..
But this is powerful write...