i held your world (I'll keep it safe)

i held your world in my hands,
and said I'd keep it safe for you
Let its secrets blend into my skin
like a million dozen tattoos.

and now all the sunbursts are
shooting from my fingers and
now the veins in my arms come 
alive with the glow of your name

are we in the place that we met?
in the forest, surrounded by the sets
of fallen trees and mold melodies
oh, how they hold onto to me!

there, i see bright birds in your world
they fly into my lonely eyes and
imbue them with the color of a loud plume
and fill the air with scent of your perfume

i held your world in my hands,
and said I'd keep it safe for you
i held your world in my hands,

so that you might finally understand,

how much i truly love you.

Reviews

[Aedelmaer]

oh wow, that's so gorgeous. I love the line ' imbue them with the color of a loud plume' blending color and sound together.
and the second stanza, the whole thing. it's so beautiful. It really seems to portray the feelings.

I love it. beautiful!

[Sweet Emotions]

This is beautiful. I love that part about secrets blending into your skin. Good job!

[.......]

of fallen trees and mold melodies
oh, how they hold onto to me!

LOVE these words, I just love this write, I love the ending words as well.
This is so lovely and sweet. So well written.