blackbird song (so this is goodbye)

a short poem about saying goodbye.

i cradled your hand in mine and 

waited for the goodbye to go by and by

as the blackbird sings its little song

it trails off in the northern sky

oh how you used to feel like lightning static
like raging forest fires and mountain leaps
we were falling like fallen angels and devils
before they sat down to weep.

Reviews

[.......]

Sad write but written oh so well.

[Coyote Poetry]

In this short poem. Create a powerful and strong story of love. I like the use of nature in poetry. Make us feel like we are connected somehow. I like the ending a lot.
"we were falling like fallen angels and devils
before they sat down to weep."
Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Helpless]

awww.... so sad, but fantastic poem