Peace to My Heart

Written for a special someone.

Loving you is inevitable

Being with you brightens

My world enlightens

Your presence brings

Happiness and peace

My pain in decrease

The cracks of my heart

Filled in by your giving

Love making me living

Breathing and feeling

The joy of this world

Unraveled and uncurled

I can breath again

Freely with you by

My side, I can rely

You are always here

When I call out for you

Together like super glue

Once again, once again

I dearly miss you

And i hope you miss me, too

For I surely love you.

 

Reviews

[Lorraine]

Some lines don't agree much with the flow, and the randomness of your phrases are a bit too shocking at some points. Even so, this has a nice and simple thought to it. It's written in such a simple way.

Keep Writing. ^___^

[Chris Lotus]

Very nice and heart-filled. Awesome job!

[Daydreamer54]

awww! This was such a sweet poem! :) I liked it!