I Once Fell In Love

Random Thoughts

I once fell in love with a man
His perfect almond eyes made me weak to my knees
His classic masculine scent was all I could think about
His stellar smile was so rare
And everything about him’
His rich skin tone
His physique
His demeanor
Surpassed all my expectations of the perfect man

I still remember how my heart beat rapidly the first time I saw him
And since then,
All I could do was dream about how we could be together

But my dreams were all I had
Since I could never tell him that I loved him so much
I never even spoke to him
All I could do was stare at him from a distance
I never gathered enough courage
Never dared to walk up to him to express my feelings

Though each time he crossed my mind
My heart would melt
The truth is, I loved him
But he didn’t even know I exist

Reviews

[Bala Gorthi]

Your random thoughts are beautiful.
Your descriptions of the man in the first stanza, of the feelings and the state of mind in the remaining sections are beautiful.and the last line showing the pain of a shy love! Well done ! Keep it up.
Thanks for sharing this well crafted write...

[Lucky Mwachi]

Your comments are always so inspiring Bala. You make me want to work even harder and you are one of the first people to ever believe in me as a writer. I truly appreciate It. Thank you!