Liquid Freedom

Freedom that is produced through movement

I can feel it
Cool to the touch
It slips thorough my grasp
I can't catch it
It moves with quicken pace
Its movements are like ebbs and flows of an ocean
I am mesmerized by its liquid movement
Relaxation and peace wash over me like a warm blanket
The world is blurred by its intoxicating presence
I reach out cautiously to capture this siren-like essence
I finally became free of this prison that is reality.

 

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

I love how you creatively used liquid movement for the poetic and lyrical challenge group. I was not expecting it to end like that and that was a terrific way to end this piece. Nicely done.