Instant Judgement

I walk the streets
I look at people that enter my view
They look back
I wonder if they judge me
I imagine the things they think of

"He looks weird"
"He must be lonely"
No one judges kindly or fairly
Appearance only tells the cliche half of who you are
The rest is lost in the sea of instant judgment

Author's Note

Do I need to add anything? Is the piece good the way it is?

Reviews

[Brittany W]

I enjoyed the piece, the only thing i think you should do is maybe if you made it longer and explored more about how people judge so harshly without even knowing each other, but thats just my opinion. Once again i enjoyed this, great write.