Onyx Glasses

Onyx Glasses

A Poem by Huggy Bear
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There are many other types of glasses besides rose color glasses.

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I have no such luck with life itself
Isolation infects me like an infectious disease
People stay far away from me like a leper
I slowly rot from within my mind
Peering behind onyx color glasses
The world looks monotone
People pass on by
Going about there day
Like nothing significant is going on
Their aura shows no stress.. no sense of strife
Hatred is built towards these people who have decent lives

© 2010 Huggy Bear


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Very personal thoughts..
Thanks for sharing…
It reveals an entirely different facet of your philosophy..regarding life…
Loved it so much….


Posted 14 Years Ago


this is a well written poem but makes the reader sense some disturbance in the dark feelings portrayed here. but I think we may all feel this way at some point in our lives. I prefer to keep the rose colored ones on but that is not always the best way to live. good write here

Posted 14 Years Ago


The rhythm scheme is a great one and the unique way you used the onyx theme for poetry and lyrical challenge group. This was well done. Your flow is a little off but the creativeness in the poem is great and it portrayed you emotions and thoughts clearly.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very powerful poem very well writen and has so many emotion. Love it!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on August 11, 2010
Last Updated on August 11, 2010
Tags: Isolation, diease, Onyx

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Huggy Bear
Huggy Bear

Astoria, NY



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- I have such an innocence and purity that not a lot of people have - Have a heart that most people can only fake - My heart has led me to some dark regions of life. - My heart has also led me to s.. more..

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