Whiskey Time

A time when liquor and peace come together til other things come into play

I open the front door
In front of me
A huge looming storm cloud approaches
It rumbles with a violent vigor

Thunder booms with authority 
Lightening made its presence known
With a heavy sigh
I sit on the porch
I took a swig of whiskey

I savor every molecule of this sweet nectar
I take another sip
The drink calms me down
My mind is released of all stress and worries
Nothing can get better then this  
On a whim I turn my attention behind me
Standing behind me is my lady

She stands like an amazon warrior
My lady is wearing a beautiful black night gown
My lust rises with every second I look at her
She glides over to me and sits next to me

She takes my whiskey and takes a sip
Within the hour we are inebriated
When we kissed
The taste became sour and foul

Our lips were dry as the Gobi desert
Yet it didn't matter
Our lust overcame all that
She grabs my hand and leads me back inside
With a final glance I look back towards the storm
I marvel at its beauty for one last time
I bid it a faint goodnight

Reviews

[DaturaBlossoms]

Good work, I really like the imagery here.

[Angel]

Good job!

[Alicante lullaby]

whiskey time indeed.sensual.

[i am skeleton jelly]

in my life all time is whiskey time

[Coyote Poetry]

Damn whiskey took me on many good and bad adventures. I like this poem. It seem you can always find someone with the same hunger and desire. The poem story is amazing. Make me go back when I was not so bright and free to roam. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Poetic Beauty]

This poem tell a story that I can picture in my mind quite well. The words are strong and paint a portrait. Great write.