Forever in Love

In love with someone that does not love you

THIEF
MURDER
I LOVED YOU
You have killed me
I gather my last breath
To air my hate for you

For many years
I gave my soul
My love
My all for you
I sacrifice my life
To make you happy

You accepted it with a fake smile
I am fool to believe you loved me
One day you break up with me
You tell me I am not trying at all
That I am insensitive to your needs

These words are bullet holes
that pierce my soul and heart
You creep to me and hug me
After you leave

You take my heart with you
I fall to my knees
I bury my face in my hands
Tears stream to no end
I fall face down
I lay ready to die

Before I depart
I impart my last words
dedicated to you
THIEF
MURDER
I LOVED YOU

Reviews

[Nickle]

This poem is rlly interesting...I loved how u turned around a love relationship into something else...You had a lot of imagery at the same time u had tons of emotion...I could imagine the woman on the ground yet I could feel her pain and anger at the same time...good poem :)

[Shalini Dinesh]

this poem reflects the pain and anger, well written, congrats for winning the contest...

[aftervision]

this is super powerful my poet -- you wrote this without camoflauge of the heart so hard to do when pain is still alive

[Coyote Poetry]

Poem is powerful. When the love is gone. We can feel like death. So many strong lines and story made this poem very good. I like the ending. Remind me of a Leonard Cohen line in a song. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a powerful statement you make when your write this. I think you show the world how hurt you were the day this person left you. Heartache is one that all of us can relate to yet we all look for love again. Sometimes it takes many many years before that happens.