Wedding Jitters

A man's view on his wedding day

......I am so nervous
In front of me lies my fate
I am getting married today
My bride is beautiful
The white gown brings out purity

Everything about her body is desirous
Her hazel eyes pierce my soul
Her lips are full and plumped
Ready to seal our enshrined union with a kiss

Every step she takes
mouth dries out of fright
breath tastes acrid
My legs become flimsy
I feel like I am about to faint

With all my might I stand tall
I wait patiently for my wife to be
She is by my side
We both smile at each other
She mouths to be that she loves me
I can not help but feel good about this
We turn out attention to the priest
As he speaks of our union
I run back the reasons why I love her
The one constant that runs in my head

She was always supportive of anything I did
She accepted me for my quirks
Many had advise her to leave me
She refuse
She declared that I made her happy

I rediscovered an eternal love
That made me propose to her
With this in hand
We exchange vows
The kiss we shared that day was magical
From that day forward we were together
Happy as we can be

Reviews

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats for this great winning piece! Great Work!

[deeps]

This is amazing, I really enjoyed this write.
I like this alot.

[Glowheart]

This is really awesome. You have a great way of showing all the different feelings. Really enjoyed this.

[JENY]

No doubt why you bagged price….
Your imagination is perfect….
And you articulate it without losing the feel..
By the by….are you married?
No need not answer…
I asked just to know…you have gone through the real…

[Shalini Dinesh]

a lovely poem, you have well described about the anxiousness, excitement, tension on the day of the wedding, well pictured...

[Poetic Beauty]

this is a wonderful poem that express what your wedding day can be like. I love the emotion that is poured into this poem. You did a wonderful job using the words in this poem.