Illusion of Friendship

I was there for you
I saved you from harm
You used to call me brother
You used to call me family
I felt like I belonged in the world

As time marched on
Your feelings changed
you make promises you never keep
You leave me hanging out late at night
When I call you
You tell me I am a nuisance

Soon the real truth comes out
You see me as weak
A person that does not deserve to be loved
You and your friends beat me for being a virgin
You spit in face and call me worthless

I am left to wonder home crying
So close to suicide
The foresight I had for life gets dimmer
I ask is this what friendship is
Is this what happens when put it on the line
I hope one day  I can find peace with others for a life time

 

Reviews

[BoSweets]

What a sad poem; I pray no one actually went through this. If so thanks for the raw share. Peace
BoSweets

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

i love this poem...i like the way it tackles friendship at its journey, whether the relationship will grow stronger or just falter...anyways, this is a good poem:)

[china]

Such raw emotion in this write and my heart cries out to the main character being mistreated. This is a Powerful write, keep up the good work.

if only this weren't so true.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

you relate the devastation of friendship betrayed in a deeply moving sincere manner~ truly affecting~

[A.A.Romanczuk]

Extremely sad but touching and honest..extremely well written, Mustafa...what a poignant exploration of a friendship that turns out to be unreal...Phenomenal

[Hello, Goodbye]

Sadness but all is layered with truth.. very good write.

[JENY]

Wow…
Mustafaa….
Fantastic……
Very sincere words…
Wonderful….
touching....too

[QuietPoet]

This was sad, but full of truth and honesty. I understand and relate. Nice write. Keep your head up, people can be harsh sometimes. Smile :)

[Sera]

Wow such strong words and emotions excellent pice of writting i also like how it reflects real life situations which not many writters succsfully accomplish