Mistakes are caused by anger
Regret sets in for making these mistakes
You allow your mind with the What If
I have caused many mistakes Most mistakes were out of my reach Misconceptions are caused by anger Regret sets in for making these faux pas You allow your mind with the What If Obsession over mistakes is a neglect within delusion It is a deadly cycle that riddles life Learn from these omissions You can live joyously While avoiding the potholes of life As long as you study your own gag reel
Nice underlying wisdom, but I think the presentation of the poem is just doesn't match. Instead of using "mistakes" over and over again, consider other synonyms to replace it. Some grammatical mistakes, but otherwise fair write. Stanzas would be a help as well
Wise words. If we learn from our mistakes. We will become better. Always a pleasure to read your poetry. Something is always learn. A excellent poem.
Coyote
Posted 15 Years Ago
Compartment 114
Compartment 114
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