Out Of Control

Based on the song Drunken Ballerina Waltz by The Spill Canvas.

It was like a huge gash,
Soaked in vinegar
Thats the way it felt
When I saw death break her.
It was like falling face first
Into a bed of razorblades,
Thats the way it felt
When they're songs played.
And now she's alone,
Wiping the alcohol from her lips,
Just let her swim in wine,
Until the bottle tips.
And it was 1,000 daggers
Stuck into her heart
Thats the way it felt when,
I saw her world fall apart
It was like a curse bestowed
That was way to sinister,
Thats the way it felt when
She thought no one would miss her.
It was like being hit in the face
With the hardest stones
Thats how it felt when,
She was painfully alone.
It was like sleeping in broken glass
It was like filling up a bleeding hole
Thats how it felt when
Her life went completely out of control.

Reviews

[Rene Velez]

nice poem Bree, really nice flow, dark, brutal at times, LOL...