Deja Voodoo
A Poem by Gabriel's Last Breath (band)
© 2015 Gabriel's Last Breath (band)
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I like it... definitely love your style! It had kind of that dark tone yet still turned out romantic in the end. Nice write!
Posted 9 Years Ago
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I like the wording!
Keep it up!
Posted 9 Years Ago
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Very sweet write there
The format is quite unique
the shades of grey and the tie of two
lovely
Posted 9 Years Ago
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I liked the poem. Deja Voodoo, I have tasted many times. Most of will trip and make mistakes. Leave destine people and places behind. Nice flow of words leading to the very nice closing. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 9 Years Ago
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wow i loved this.Great work MD.Plus,a great way of presentation:)
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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A battle of two minds comes to mind. I enjoyed this write and had power behind the statements
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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6 Reviews
Added on June 19, 2015
Last Updated on June 21, 2015
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Gabriel's Last Breath (band)LA
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Airforce/Marine Corps Vet. First time submitting things that i write. Mostly i am a songwriter, but i have articles that I blab about, and people always tell me to submit them. I also added a small am.. more..
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