Cancer of Youth

Reviews

[fattycbreezy52]

Hard-hitting writeup.Stay strong,buddy:)

[Tiffany Thomas]

This was beautiful and heart wrenching. Very well written, and I am so sorry for your loss.

[Gabriel's Last Breath (band)]

THANK you for your review. i wrote this for an old teacher of mine. after losing touch for years i learned his daughter passed away to cancer. i wrote this for him and her.

[Tiffany Thomas]

You’re welcome! I’m almost at a loss for words after reading this poem. Keep up the good work!

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful and sad poem. Cancer take the best from us. I have known lost and death. Can't forget the pain. Just learn to live with someone. The poem had a deep personal feel. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[~]

This poem moved me.. so many emotions wrapped inside. i love the repeating refrain.. pain and strength together.

[Gabriel's Last Breath (band)]

Thank you for your review! I wrote this for an old teacher of mine a few days ago. Made it into a song and recorded a video. His little girl was only 12 years old.

[~]

Very sad... What a beautiful sentiment you've left with your teacher.

[Gabriel's Last Breath (band)]

thank you, i know it was a tough one. sometimes it's hard to capture the feeling when you havn't experienced it. empathy is the key to writing in my opinion. hey, check out the one i just uploaded A Stars Point of View. I saw something you posted about stars I was starting to read, then it made me think of it!

[~]

On my way :)

[Gabriel's Last Breath (band)]

https://video.xx.fbcdn.net/hvideo-xat1/v/t42.1790-2/11421842_10207210249913989_1964717367_n.mp4?efg=eyJybHIiOjMwMCwicmxhIjo1MjJ9&rl=300&vabr=140&oh=45baeb64c1912bf4f7ecaecdabc3bdd3&oe=5581660B

music to it