Ambiance

Getting out of something before it's too late, and you become someone you're not.

Reviews

[KWP]

Ha wise words and a strong mind ... Not always so easy.

You are a great songwriter indeed ...

Can I suggest you spilt the lines over two to make it easier to read ?

[Gabriel's Last Breath (band)]

Thank you and Absolutely, do you mean space the paragraphs or.?

[KWP]

No jut wherever you have a full stop or comma - it will flow more easily for the reader :-)

[Gabriel's Last Breath (band)]

Ahh i see, i will do that! thx

[Gabriel's Last Breath (band)]

https://video.xx.fbcdn.net/hvideo-xfa1/v/t42.1790-2/11383693_10207110229053530_1695495868_n.mp4?efg=eyJybHIiOjcxOCwicmxhIjoyMTUyfQ%3D%3D&rl=718&vabr=399&oh=9673f31dcdf04399b3af98beb8b5e2dc&oe=5581623E

If you want to hear the song i found it.

[KWP]

ooooh what a treat ... are you singing or on guitar ?

[Gabriel's Last Breath (band)]

singing, my bestie on guitar lol

[KWP]

oh yeah and that format looks great - just perhaps larger spacing between the lines now ... not much

[Gabriel's Last Breath (band)]

ok ill work on that tomorrow for ure. thanks for the help

[KWP]

you have a great voice .. thanks for sharing X

[Gabriel's Last Breath (band)]

thank you! thanks for hearing