An Experiment in Cacophony.

An Experiment in Cacophony.

A Poem by Jason Young

Kooky khaki colors

Strobe-trapped teal

All insist on teaming up

On how I totally feel

 

Kaleidoscope energy

Cherry brown eyes

Let me close my brain

And think to see tonight

 

Everything you could show

I'm afraid I've seen

Honey, take this to heart

What could it be to me?

 

I love you so.

© 2008 Jason Young


Author's Note

Jason Young
This is an experiment in cacophony- the deliberate use of harsh-sounding and clashing sounds to make everybody's ears bleed. This is actually relatively non-cacophonic, I think, even though it sounds terrible when read out loud. So, the worse this sounds, the better I did. Any feedback?

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Jason Young
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