Cupid's Evil Twin

She hit me with

a sucka punch

my battleship

was sunk

 

"See you never

clever-dick"

and then she was

on the run

 

But the streets are

cold tonight

kid

don't do something stupid

 

A headshot from

Cupid's evil twin

spilled love

on the pavement

the shape of a

torn heart 

or a fist

Reviews

[Emily B]

Spare and taut. Every word exactly where it ought to be.

[James Takeo Panton]

Short sweet and spunky...i like it!