Smokin' an' Lookin'

Smokin' an' Lookin'

A Story by Jim W White

She looked at me

As if to say,

"Don't you know

How I feel?"

 

I lit a cigarette

And looked

Right back.

 

Her eyes asked,

"Do you think it's

All a game?"

 

As if Love's

Some big deal.

 

I just smoked

And looked

Right back.

                

                   

© 2008 Jim W White


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Jim W White
Jim W White

Ghettosville, UK, United Kingdom



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