You Will

His teeth grew longer when she walked into the room...release must follow....

I watch you.

Feel my energy as you walk past,

Unsure of why you need to stare.

Your nervous fingers reach up to

Brush your long slender neck,

Where the chill begins

Where I soon will be

Tasting

Drinking

Becoming you

You will give me life.

You will feel my power.

You will feed my endless need.

I will not waste a drop

Of your precious gift

You will writhe beneath me

Needing something you can’t name

I will give you pleasure for

The mercy you will show me

The strength you will give me

And your screams will become

Hoarse requests to become me

I will deny you

This is how I will love you

This is how I will save you

And when I am gone

You will feel lost

An unreasonable ache

You will not know my touch

You will not know my smell

You will not know my face

You will only know that I was there

The only proof will be

My brand

My mark

Placed desperately on

Your

Long

Slender

Neck

 

Soon

Sweet one

Soon.

 

 

© 2008 musegirlsm

Author's Note

Vampires need love too!

Reviews

[Lori]

I LOVE this. The way you completely get into the voice and make it so dynamic, alluring and REAL. It's very amazing writing, and I think that it has real depth, too, because it can be read only as a vampire poem, or it can be read metaphorically. It really resonates.

[Yvonne Heidt]

Dayamn. Darkly erotic yet dangerous and scary at the same time!

Great job!

[pal]

"You will only know that I was there;The only proof will be;My brand;My mark;Placed desperately on;Your;Long;Slender;Neck;Soon;Sweet one;Soon."

aha lovely way .. imagining..

pal

[Carole]

Very imaginative...Use to watch this stuff as a kid, but haven't in years. Very good write for this type of audience...definitely compelling and gripping. :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Down right dark and seductive... love how intense this poem was all the way through... I'm not going outside tonight!!

[BrightEyes]

wow...very sensual and scary...all at the same time! yes, I guess vampires need love too lol. this is an amazing write. I am at a loss for words here...while there has always been a sexual nature tied into the bite of vampires, I've never seen anything quite so sensual as this work of yours.

laura

[Fran Marie]

A most enjoyable read about the wampires of the night~
A Chilling and well penned piece ~Fran Marie

[Sara Muschweck]

Such a sensual write, wow, makes you want to find Vampire to take as your lover. This was so wonderfully written. Great one.