Change

A poem for all of those who pursue to change themselves to being better

Gone, are those weak thoughts.
Returned, has that fire within me.
Free, am I from those heavy rocks.
Pointless, has been my stupidity.

Up, is where I’ll be aiming.
Down, I will never creep.
Faith, will I be Keeping.

Change, is what I seek.

Reviews

[M.Babu]

I love how you've structured it in a sort of question answer prose.
Very creative too the aspects you've managed to cover and how they've led to what you seek.
It had a very good flow to it and i loved how the short length managed to convey a powerful message. You got IT man. Start sharing them with me:)

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

There comes a time we embrace change my friend.

[qaralynn]

I love this! great rhyme..

[White Ink]

Powerful words, well done!

[Arabdha]

this is a really inspiring piece..the poem,especially the first paragraph is beautifully written..

[My Interfearence]

feels like you could put a melody to this poem - good effort and change will surely come

[Crowley]

This hits on almost every important lesson that a human being can profess to be working on. I love the short and direct nature of the message and the deep and uncompromising ring of the self. Great job.....loved this.

[FJ Davis]

Promising, young man.

[Raven97]

Great work of writing. Shows your ambitions to change. Keep writin’.