Queen of malevolence

a poem that i decided to write!

 

Welcomed in Jezebel's lustful embrace,

Kissed by the woeful creed of betrayal's tender lips

She greets you with a feral taste

Alive with passion she excites you

You forget all contemplation

All realization of who this woman is

She is a harlot

A w***e

She is wicked on her best day

And malevolent on her worst

However, no man can resist her voluptuous swagger

Her kiss

The way she makes love

No man can defend against that intrigue

She seems to possess

Just when you think she can be tamed

She strikes

Like a fierce serpent

She has no heart

No soul

She devours you whole

And leaves nothing

But the bones of your regret

Jezebel

The beast

The black widow

The damned

Author's Note

what do you think of the subject matter?

Reviews

[Legion]

I like it. Very descriptive and reminds of a few women I've known in my past. :) Chewed me up and spat me out they did. LOL Reminds me of Madame Rouge from my song "The Curse From Madame Rouge". You might like her. ;)

[Wolfwind Words]

I liked the subject! It was woven into the words well. Clearly bringing across the picture on the harlot, that man can't resist.
It speaks a truth that many men and women would rather turn their eyes from in this world. Yet, I like that you write about it sense it is part of our world. We should never forsake something dark, for the ease of living life.

Thanks for sharing!
Infinity's Shadow

[Clockwork]

Wicked yes, but in a way sadistically seductive just like the subject. I liked it very much, your images were cutting, yet endearing. I might suggest tighter stanzas but one can see that you are a talented writer with a good amount of potential.

[Sarah]

Love this; it was wicked, dark, and playful. ;o Great job, definitely original! ^___^