An Hour LostA Story by Mugen StylesA story about a young man who thinks that money is everything. Sunlight
creeps around every thin line between the blinds of a young man’s room. The
room itself is fairly minuscule, or at least it appears that way seeing as how
most of the floor space is taken up by only three items; a bed, upon which the
young man sleeps, a dresser five drawers tall with not a single piece of fabric
astray, and a simple wooden nightstand that almost seems as if it was carved
the day before. An antique analog clock sits upon this nightstand. The short
hand points just ahead of the number seven, whereas the longer hand stretches
out towards the five. Focusing on the young man it’s
apparent that he can’t be anything over twenty, his eyes begin jolting around
sporadically and suddenly he awakens, eyes wide open but yet to make a move.
His head tilts upwards, directing his attention to the antique clock. Then as
if he doesn't believe what he sees he picks up a fairly beat-up and battered
flip phone from the bed, sits up, flicks his wrist and looks at the digital
time on the screen.
YOUNG MAN: F**k His cell
phone starts playing one of the most generic ringtones ever before heard. YOUNG MAN: Hey, hey, I know, I’m on my way right now, I’ll be
there before eight. A low tone
signals the caller has hung up. The young man still replies. OSWALD: Good plan, never would have
thought up that s**t on my own. Once again he flicks his wrist. The phone collapses on top of itself.
MAN: Yo, this seat taken? As an
answer, Oz shakes his head. Then he notices that the man now appears about his
age this close up, did he look like that before? MAN: Don’t mind if I do then. The man sits
down, a little close for comfort, but he seems friendly enough so Oz decides
not to move as to not seem rude. MAN: Well what’s your name man? If we’re going to be sitting
here for the next ten minutes we might as well talk about something. OSWALD: Uhh, well you can call me Oz, that’s what most people
call me. MAN: Like the Wizard of Oz? Oz sighs. OSWALD: If you only knew how many times I've heard that one.
You know most people just ignore me whenever I’m sitting here, I’m just
surprised you didn't sit down and pull out some smartphone. MAN: Oh I don’t have a phone, I find it gets in the way of
communication. OSWALD: Isn't that what phones are for? MAN: Maybe they were at first, but not anymore. Now they’re
more of a distraction than anything. OSWALD: Distraction? From what? MAN: Life. The man sits
there for a second not saying anything. OSWALD: What did you say your name
was? MAN: I didn't. You can call me Guy. OSWALD: Like Fieri? GUY: God no. I’m happy to say I don’t hear that one often. Oz half
chuckles to himself and then takes out his phone again to check the time, 7:41. GUY: Oh and you’re the one
complaining about others pulling out there phones. OSWALD: Hey, I’m just checking the time, it’s not like I’m
playing Clash of Clans or anything. I've already lost an hour of my shift today
because I woke up late and I don’t need some ‘Guy’ giving me crap for it. GUY: Got damn dude, chill. I can see where your stress lies
immediately, work. OSWALD: Well yeah, of course, you could probably say that to
anyone, but it’s not like I can do anything about it, I gotta make that cash,
just like everyone else. GUY: Is that why you scour the sidewalk for change? Oz goes
silent for a second. OSWALD: Umm… what? GUY: Oh you didn't notice? I wasn't that far behind you when
you were walking over here, I could see you looking for change all over the
place. OSWALD: So what? I mean, money’s tight, always has been, I
get what I can even if it is just some sidewalk change. GUY: I don’t blame you, no harm done, but you’re looking too
hard. OSWALD: What do you mean by that? GUY: The more you seek something, the more elusive it can
become. OSWALD: What are you, a fortune cookie? GUY: What I’m saying is, sometimes it’s best to let things
fall into place instead of forcing them. Sometimes you find what you’re really
looking for when you aren't looking at all. OSWALD: That sounds like a lot of bullshit to me" Oz laughs
and so does Guy, but in a flash Guy’s face looks as serious as ever. GUY: It may sound so, but you did
miss this on your walk. Guy pulls
out a fifty dollar bill. OSWALD: No way, I would have seen
that if it was on the ground. GUY: Oh but that’s where you made your mistake, you were so
busy looking for money where you expected it to be, you passed up the big fish. OSWALD: Where was it then? GUY: Up in one of those low hanging branches back there. Guy points back down the path to a couple of trees that were considerably smaller than the ones surrounding it. The branches drooped over the path low enough that you’d have to duck if you were about six feet tall. They created a sort of archway, the sun continuing to rise behind the treetops, making the scene movie worthy. Oz never noticed these trees’ on his walk before, but then again his head always was faced downwards. GUY: Who ever said money didn't grow
on trees. Guy smiled
slyly looking quite pleased with himself. OSWALD: How do you expect me to
believe that was up in some random tree? GUY: I don’t, but if you want to you can, I have no reason to
tell you anything but the truth. That’s why I’m here actually, to tell you the
truth. OSWALD: What…? What truth. Guy’s throat
starts getting raspy and his breathing gets real deep. GUY: Oz…I am your father! OSWALD: Oh, f**k off! GUY: I’m just messing with you man,
trying to lighten the mood a little. OSWALD: Was the mood dim? GUY: Money isn’t everything Oz. OSWALD: …Come again? GUY: You can’t let money control your life, the pursuit of
money isn’t worth the end game, let it come to you. OSWALD: Money isn’t just going to ‘come to me’ I mean what do
you want me to do, quit my job and just walking around until I find fifty
dollar bills in the trees? Guy
snickers. GUY: Of course not, but here, have
this. He hands Oz
the fifty dollar bill. OSWALD: I can’t take this, you found it, I mean, you probably
didn’t even find it. What? Ya feel sorry for me or something? Just because I’m
struggling with money doesn’t mean I don’t have any, I just do my best not to
use any of the funds I’ve accumulated, okay? GUY: I don’t feel sorry for you, at least not for the reasons
you suspect. What are you saving all this moolah for though? OSWALD: I mean… money is power right? If I can just save up
enough the possibilities will be endless, I will be able to do anything I can
dream of. GUY: Is that so? OSWALD: Well yeah, I mean that’s how the world works. GUY: Maybe, but you forgot about all the factors. Let me ask
you something Oz, are you scared of dying? OSWALD: No, I mean I guess I just
don’t really ever think about it. GUY: Well you probably should,
what’s going to happen to all of that dough if you do? OSWALD: Well… GUY: Say this bus that we’re waiting for is driven by a
lunatic, he nears the stop but doesn’t actually stop and instead turns us both
into road kill, what then? OSWALD: That would never happen. GUY: Crazier things
have, so who are you to say that it wouldn’t? Who’s to say that in another
universe you weren’t decapitated by that tree limb back there? OSWALD: Now you’re just being ridicu- Before Oz
could finish his sentence things started to get blurry, he wiped his eyes to no
avail. For a second all he could see was black and then all of a sudden
everything was clear again. GUY: I am not, anything can happen
if you’re open minded enough.
At that moment the horn from a bus could be heard, guessing
from the sound, it was only a street or so away. This wouldn’t be of any alarm,
however, the horn didn’t stop, and it continued to ring out as if someone had
fell asleep on the steering wheel. Then from around the corner a deep maroon
bus with advertisements for some law firm materialized from around the corner,
cutting the turn so sharp the bus itself was on two wheels if only for a
second. Before Oz had any time to think the bus came hurtling towards Guy and
him and then… Nothing. Utter darkness once again. This felt much different
than the two seconds of just not being able to see anything though. He couldn’t
visualize, or even feel anything. Hell, could he ever think? He sat there
suspended in nothingness simply existing. Then he finally did feel something,
his pockets grew heavier and heavier.
DEEP VOICE: SIX THOUSAND FIVE HUNDRED AND THIRTY NINE DOLLARS
AND SIXTY SIX CENTS. No more weight was added to either pocket once this voice
spoke to him. It was hard to interpret whether the voice was inside or outside
of his head, not to mention it sounded familiar for some reason. He tried to
think on that familiar feeling but as soon as the attempt was made the voice
blared out again.
DEEP VOICE: SIX THOUSAND FIVE HUNDRED AND THIRTY NINE DOLLARS
AND SIXTY FIVE CENTS. SIXTY FOUR. SIXTY THREE.
The voice sped up. With every
descending number Oz could see his fortune slip away penny by penny, floating
away from his physical body. The voice now spoke so fast it was hard to even
make out what numbers it was spouting anymore.
DEEP VOICE: FOURTHREETWOONNNNEEE….
ZERO.
As the word zero emitted from the darkness, time seemed to
come to a stop. Zero, zero, zero, it was repeated over and over and over again
until Oz couldn’t take it anymore. He gathered any strength he could find
within himself and mustered a faint scream that didn’t at all compare to the
overbearing boom of the word zero. Then as quick as it had begun it all ended.
GUY: Yo man, you missed your bus. Oz opened up
his eyes to find he was sitting on the bus stop bench next to Guy still, not
dead, and definitely not being run over by a bus with Morgan and Morgan’s faces
on it. OSWALD: What the f**k man, what just
happened?! GUY: Umm, you mean the part where you fell asleep or the part
where you missed your bus? OSWALD: Missed my… Oz flipped
open his phone again to find the digital interface beaming: 8:00am. OSWALD: F**k… oh f**k, oh f**k, oh
f**k. GUY: Hey it’s okay man, it’s just a
day of work. OSWALD: You don’t understand! I need
every hour I can get so I can save up my m- GUY: Money. Money, money, money, haven’t you learned anything?
Still talking about getting the big bucks huh Oz? Even after getting hit by a
big bus? OSWALD: Wha…How could you possibly know that I just dreamed
about that?! GUY: Dreamed? Well aren’t we imaginative. Guy laughs
to himself as if it what he said was some sort of inside joke. As he does his
features begin to change again, causing him age from twenty to… forty maybe?
Late thirties to be generous. GUY: Anyways kid, I gotta get going, I wouldn't fret over
your paycheck though. It won’t be hurt any. It’s your day off if you haven’t
realized that yet. Guy pulls
out a flip phone that looks completely identical to Oz’s and punches in some
numbers. Oz can hear the ringing from Guy’s phone and after two cycles of it
his own phone starts to ring and vibrate in his pocket. He pulls it out and
looks over at Guy in wonder, then slowly opens he phone. OSWALD: Hello…? CALLER: Where the f**k are you Oz, you’re over an hour late
now, not only are you missing out on your shift, I’m docking your pay. Through the
phone Oz hears his boss’s voice, but he sit’s and watches as Guy speaks each
and every word into his own phone. OSWALD: What in the s**t is going
on? GUY: That’s a question we all tend
to ask, more frequently than you might think. And with
that Guy walked away.
Oz never did see Guy again. He often contemplates the
situation and cannot come up with an accurate answer to whether or not Guy was
ever a real person. In the end it really doesn’t matter. Just like the fifty
dollar bill that currently occupies the drawer of a certain nightstand. Not to
say anything in Oz’s life really changed, he continues to save money and work a
s****y minimum wage job, but his thought process isn’t focused on all the guap.
Ever since meeting with Guy he hasn’t been able to stop thinking of all the
ways he can use his cash to make his life worth living. He spent over half of
his savings to start up a charity foundation entitled “Money Isn’t Everything”
that in turn ended up hoarding most of the money for themselves to get the word
out about their charity. After that he proceeded to do what he set out to
accomplish without the charity, helping people who were in his own situation
see the light he was shown. One day every week he still goes out to that same bus stop
and takes an hour of someone’s time to make them realize what took under thirty
minutes for Guy to show him. Dollars and cents don’t mean a thing until you
give your life a purpose to thrive on. You can work your life away and earn as
much money as possible and still never do anything you actually wanted to do.
To gain this revelation, is well worth an hour lost. © 2015 Mugen Styles |
StatsAuthorMugen StylesKeystone Heights, FLAboutI'm Mugen Styles and I do a lot of stuff. I work two jobs, make music, love to draw, and am now writing short stories as well. more..Writing
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