lovers within shadow

memories shutter and turn into romantic love story

how far can we go this way

only shadow of death had the opportunity to see us

its prohibitted... i know the pain

black and red... doom and tears..

i hide the guit inside..

guillotine will come and see us

if we both caught in fire..

it's the only thing we can say..

i love the torns between us..

litle by little... the ache triggers my numb heart

i don't want us to be apart..

we've become one and whole

i can't find a home to anyone..

Reviews

[Pixie Meat]

Very nicely stated emotion here, mild grammar and spelling errors but nothing that can't be fixed. I sort of like the unneditted feeling to this actually...it's like the raw emotion is just dancing under the surface of the words. Beautiful write!

[kakie]

This is a great poem. I think if you worked alittle on the grammar it would make the poem even greater! Thanks for sharing!