Look Into My Lash Rimmed Eyes

Look into my lash rimmed eyes,

these mirrors of fascination, enchantment,

silent acclamation, the entrapment of breathless sighs.

I wish to pull you in, immerse you in my mind,

feed of the pungency of your captivating kind.

Let's drown together in numbing pleasure,

create whirlpools of ecstasy,

swirl in thundering waterfalls that pour over cliffs of no measure.

Look into my lashed rimmed eyes,

answer the confusion, bring truth to light.

See the reflecting teardrops, help me build a dam.

I want to learn your ways, whats its like to not have to fight,

to be subtle and polished in conquests,

keep a charming distance afloat.

Sheer excitement running through your body,

powerful Zeus in your capturing of hearts.

I shall be your Aphrodite, reigning in beauty and lust.

Rejoicing in the passion flowing through me,

refining the palate of my arts.

Look into my lash rimmed eyes,

catch the twinkle, get lose in my gaze.

Wink in acceptance of this adventure,

lets get lost in this neverending maze.

 

Reviews

[MachinaWriter]

Beautiful, amazing imagery. A very evocative poem, brimming with allure and intrigue, beauty and reverence. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem ^^

[Melody Telleria]

I am truly humbled by your opinion. Making others fall captive by my words is the beauty that keeps me going.

[MachinaWriter]

I feel the same way about my writing. I would love to hear your opinion on a few of my poems, it would mean a lot coming from someone whose poems I enjoy ^^