I agree
I have a four tier bookcase near my bed
Full of my mother’s old photo albums
Mine and my sisters and my aunts too
I feel all our lives summed up in total in these pages
Plastic sheets holding memories that in future generations no one will really care about
But the important thing is now what we do this second not the future
Well done it really made me think about the word
Futility
Thank you Julie, for reading and for the very kind words ... LIfe itself is filled with futility, bu.. read moreThank you Julie, for reading and for the very kind words ... LIfe itself is filled with futility, but it is all that we have but death itself and that oblivion which death brings to us all ...
2 Years Ago
I don’t think when we die we become oblivious I think we gain a tenth dimension of the whole shab.. read moreI don’t think when we die we become oblivious I think we gain a tenth dimension of the whole shabangle universe and can see and understand it so clearly instantly like turning in a light
I agree
I have a four tier bookcase near my bed
Full of my mother’s old photo albums
Mine and my sisters and my aunts too
I feel all our lives summed up in total in these pages
Plastic sheets holding memories that in future generations no one will really care about
But the important thing is now what we do this second not the future
Well done it really made me think about the word
Futility
Thank you Julie, for reading and for the very kind words ... LIfe itself is filled with futility, bu.. read moreThank you Julie, for reading and for the very kind words ... LIfe itself is filled with futility, but it is all that we have but death itself and that oblivion which death brings to us all ...
2 Years Ago
I don’t think when we die we become oblivious I think we gain a tenth dimension of the whole shab.. read moreI don’t think when we die we become oblivious I think we gain a tenth dimension of the whole shabangle universe and can see and understand it so clearly instantly like turning in a light
I enjoyed the reason. Pessimistic but real. Thanks for posting
Posted 2 Years Ago
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2 Years Ago
Thank you Ranger, for reading, and for understanding that all too often life itself is in fact pessi.. read moreThank you Ranger, for reading, and for understanding that all too often life itself is in fact pessimistic, which surely must have spawned the adages, "Life's a B***h," "S**t happens, and then, you die!" ...
Maybe we should chisel our poems on the walls of caves :) They may have more of a chance of surviving then. At some point all my efforts will be gone, that is a fact. Whether it is in ten years or a hundred, who knows. Liked this piece Marvin. Pleased to meet you.
Chris
Posted 2 Years Ago
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2 Years Ago
Chris,
Yes, Chisling our poetic efforts to stone might help a tiny bit, but I am spea.. read moreChris,
Yes, Chisling our poetic efforts to stone might help a tiny bit, but I am speaking of that great poetic effort that is our lives, our every breathing, living moment, until death with only friends and family to choose to remember or recall what and who we were and determine to keep our memories alive for as long as they live ... After that ...? ... Who knows, and who will give a damn ...?
" -- of our never having been …" --- Well, until and if our words are stated aloud. and again. --- Thus, some find immortality.
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2 Years Ago
Thank you JE,
sadly there is not such thing as forever, eternity or immortality, for,.. read moreThank you JE,
sadly there is not such thing as forever, eternity or immortality, for, sooner or later, even the best Poet/author/person in the world shall be forgotten and swept beneath the rug of eons gone by ...
2 Years Ago
Oh, now don't go make-in Shakespeare, Rudyard Kipling, Robert Burns, Oscar Wilde, John Milton, John .. read moreOh, now don't go make-in Shakespeare, Rudyard Kipling, Robert Burns, Oscar Wilde, John Milton, John Keats, Charlotte Bronte, & Charles Dickens all depressed about their standing on the endurance pages of history. And those are just a few. However, you may be right when quoting the Good Book. ... "Ah, vanity, vanity, all is vanity and chasing after the wind."
and if all the paper upon which we have written our poems is destroyed by fire...nothing will be left to say we have been here.
Maybe ice would be better....will have to ask Robert F.
j.
Posted 2 Years Ago
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2 Years Ago
Thanks for reading Jacob, and yes fire would destroy written copies, the power grid going do would r.. read moreThanks for reading Jacob, and yes fire would destroy written copies, the power grid going do would render our PC's useless, and if one dares to write and compose on the net and fails to back his/her writing up, if the Net goes down one shall be screwed and tattooed ... LOL! ... Though, I am actually speaking of us as Human Beings, in this particular instance ...
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