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You are the joy in my eyes

The light of my heart

Everything to me

I miss you within

When I can’t talk to you

You mean the whole world to me

If I lost you

I would die

Without you I crumble

I shed tears

Thinking of you

I smile

When I remember your words

Looking back now

I am glad I met you

To love

To life

To us

Forever and always

Reviews

[Trigorin]

Not bad. There's obviously emotion behind this piece and you express that fairly well. I think there's a few lines which come across as perhaps a little too staccato and which could be elaborated on, but that's up to you.