Hell

I wrote this in the 8th grade. I went through a period of hating the world and depression.

It’s the place I live in

I live among the flames

The devil is my father

The dead are my neighbors

The rocks are my bed

The bones are my clothes

What kind of place is this is live?

It is my home

The bodiless moans of the black hole are my pools

My pets are the dead animals

My friends are the souls

God is my uncle

It is the place I live

Hell

Reviews

[TLK]

I am most confused by "The bodiless moans of the black hole are my pools", and "God is my uncle".

Overall an invocation of the mismatched monstrosity of Hell.

[HopelessRomantic]

I wrote this in the 8th grade, I was 14. The wording would be much better if I had written it recently as opposed to 15 years ago. But thank you