He doesn't give a s**t

The title says it all not the best poem and I think teres a stanza that needs to go but tell me whatcha think

My body is tired
It's broken and worn 
So much pulling and ripping 
My heart giving in from being torn 

I ache all over 
All I want to do is sleep 
They call it depression 
I call it needing peace to keep 

I wish to stay in my room 
I hate to come out
Because when I do he's still gone
And all you do is shout

I find it easier just to hide 
And to avoid life 
To ignore my pain 
And try to forget all strife 

But I'm finding the farther I go
The harder it is to return 
I no longer have that spark
Or the eagerness to learn

I find it hard to laugh 
It hurts to smile 
You say if you can I can
But to me it's not worth while

You weren't the only one hurt 
My heart can attest to that
I gave him my all too
And he pushed at me and spat 

So when I sit here know I hurt too
My tears come just as easy 
my heart breaks each day
And im always feeling queasy 

So I just lock myself away 
Because I know I can't deal with it 
If only he knew how much pain he caused
But he doesn't give a s**t.

Reviews

[Alicia Schroeder]

This is a from the heart peice, honost peice.. Great one!!

[wirte4me]

I absolutely LOVE this. It really brings out the truth. Great job.

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[KatiePie]

The honesty in this is incredible.

[lawrence bear]

great work, felt your pain, you've expressed so much emotion in here.
through pain and sorrow, we then learn to over come what has over whelmed us.
here's looking at you kid, keep it up ;)

[Cee. Es.]

wow, i know the feeling but i think you express it wonderfully. thank you for the read, it was a great poem

[Arsenic Nemesis]

Very powerful, the emotion shown was stunning. A great piece, keep it up~

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

These words haunt me.
wow...

[Matt Shriver]

Amazing. Such raw emotion. Such stinging pain. Sometimes the hardest moments in our lives bring out the best and most brutally honest writing out of us. I give you respect for writing on something so dear to you. Very well done piece.