I'm....

yea not sure it worked out the way i wanted it

IM wondering wishing and hoping

that things will soon change

Im praying Im listening im silent

for this life has become so strange

 

Im lost cold and tired

needing a simple break

Im thinking im believe im pretending

this all was a mistake

 

Im searching looking and trying to see

a little change in heart

im crying im begging im pleading

for some kind of new start

 

im calm peaceful and at ease

knowing this all will end

im patient im thoughtful im happy

i will no longer have to pretend

 

im leaving going and saying goodbye

i no longer belong here

im great im safe im free

for i no longer have to live in fear

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[DeathByChoice]

I think this turned out rather nicely actually although adding commas would have made it a little easier to read, but still a good poem :)

[wirte4me]

Really good. I liked the intensity in this one. Great job.

~Button :D

[MissWordSmith]

one of your best for sure! the meter was clear cut and quick to read.
this..
'Im lost cold and tired

needing a simple break

Im thinking im believe im pretending

this all was a mistake'

was lovely!

[Arsenic Nemesis]

A strong piece, nicely structured and well written, good job~

[Matt Shriver]

Great poem. I loved how it was written. I could really feel the emotion in it. It flowed beautifully as well. Well done.

[Fallacy Pharmacy]

Nicely written, this poem has a great rhyme & flow. Certainly full of emotion, and many can relate to this poem-very well done :)

[Sports Girl]

It turned out really good.