Baby you will never deserve me

if only i could really figure all this out its there its just hard to actually do easier said than done

Doesnt take much to see

that you are very dear to me.

I believe you know it more than anyone

for the look you wear is as if you've won.

 

But just so you know

I can and will let you go.

Everyone says your bad news

they tell me i will gain nothing and only loose.

 

I should know this by now

but sometimes we are stuck in the how?

I havent forgotten the pain

merely pushed it back to keep myself sane.

 

So believe me when i say its hard

knowing you played me like another card.

When the feels of love seems to remain

i want to grab you back but control i must maintain.

 

So when you asked me to again take your hand

i must say no and hope you understand.

I know i can only be your friend

and that will forever hurt me till the end.

 

I love you means nothing to you

and i know theres nothing i could do.

To make you change would be suprising

but i know im only fantasizing

 

so i'll hug you and pretend im fine

and for the last time let your lips touch mine.

Because your not good that i can see

and baby you will never deserve me

Author's Note

sorry for spelling errors

Reviews

[AmeliaMae]

i really like the flow and there was incredible feeling behind all of this! very good write!

[Ruth]

To have such an intense feeling is not easy, especially when not requited in the many ways we wish it could be! Perfect poem xx

[Matt Shriver]

Very nice. Well done.

[Sports Girl]

wow incredible job

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Wow. You have an incredible talent for unearthing serious emotion.
Bravo!

[Im a reel vamp lover]

I like this. Really good.

[Hailey]

I like this, very good job not only on the poem, but being able to actually do this (if this is based off of a real life experience, which im sure it is) this sends out a positive message to people everywhere who dont have the strength to do this themselves and i can appreciate it, for that definitely makes it stand out from all the "i cant ever resist you" poems i read. so, good job :)