speaking out of anger

i dont care lol what any of you say about this poem i dont think ive wrote anything worse yes i always say dont say that but im not gonna lie im not sure i like it anyway tell me what you think

 words flew out of my mouth
so angry i scream and shout
one thing i said too quick
and too late it was out

stopping never was a thought
i was out of control
my anger had overbore me
and stress had taken a toll

though there was no excuse
for what i said was wrong
i could never take it back
and forgiveness would take so long

winning had never been the goal
i just wanted to be heard
certainly not like that
i shouldnt have said a word

but now it was too late
no forgiveness would come my way
i had already done my damage
no apology was worth to say

sorry means nothing as it is
because they still never forget
i guess i learned one thing
say something when your angry your bound to regret

Reviews

[DesertRose]

Oh, I enjoyed reading this.
And it's true, about saying things and then regreting them later...Its happened many a times.
But, anywho, your a great writer!

[Thoctar]

I like this poem, its chaotic and yet ordered, like they are real thoughts and emotions in their pure form. You may not like it, but i do!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

You captured the spirit of regret with ease.
I love the warning you gave. It had marvelous
imagery supporting the emotions.

[vido.]

this is cleverly written, swirling different uses of rythem in an interesting and capturing poem. the content is very powerful, and as it is true. cant say i havent done this, though. great write!

[Arsenic Nemesis]

A nicely written poem here, mortal, very powerful and emotional, I really enjoyed it. I particularly liked the line "my anger had overbore me" very good, liked it a lot. Great job here, keep it up!~

[mir]

Nicely written with words of wisdom. This is an important lesson to learn that unfortunately, we sometimes (many times!) still forget even after we get older! Great that you can put this exerience into a well-written poem, though!