my pain is eventually your pain too

my fist cannot make you feel what i feel
understand my anger and pain
know what i have been through
but just what you gain

my tears cannot open your eyes
allow you to understand me
give you a heart
or even help you see

my shouting cannot make you hear
and listen to my cry
help you know you wrong
or see my smile is a lie

but your pain is a reminder
and a pay pack to you
when you hurt others
you get it too

tears are to be wiped
words are meant for you to hear
first are meant to be held
and hurt shouldn't bee near

Reviews

[Alicia Schroeder]

Greatly said.. do onto others as they do to you, in most cases..lol, this was a nice way of saying someone's been hurt and words sometimes cut like a knife, if only they could feel the pain they sometimes cast upon another, maybe then the cruel people of the world would wake up, but then again, maybe not.. Great read :)

[Sports Girl]

Great read

[Adam :P]

emotional, good read.

[EmpressPoetess]

Profound writing, deeply emotional of pain.

[SpokenWord]

Internal or heart pain is more than what a fist could be. I like how you went through each verse with descriptions of each thing. This is a wonderful and a good read.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Great poem. It would make a really nice song.

[Im a reel vamp lover]

I love it. Makes me want to cry.

[Im a reel vamp lover]

I love it. Makes me want to cry.