Just as he promiseD

Um I guess I'm having a religious thing my past few poems I guess it has to do with more prayer and to be honest when I start writing them my intention was not that but I like the turn out

Are you listening 
I am calling 
My voice seems distant
My faith falling

Are you there
Because I can't see you.
I feel alone 
And Nothing seems true 

I am listing my child
You just haven't heard
I'm speaking clearly
Listen closely and you will hear my word

I have made a promise
That promise will stay true
Don't loose faith
I promise I'll never leave you

I know that you are scared
I see you don't understand
Hold on for me
And I'll take you by the hand 

Are you listening lord
I pleaded out loud
I heard him whisper yes
And away went my cloud

I am listening he spoke 
I am near he cried 
I will always love you
Your fears have lied

Come to me he pleaded
I ran as fast I could
Take me I hand he said
And he took my hand as he promised he would

Reviews

[EmpressPoetess]

very lovely and tender words of faith!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is a sweet unbreakable bond.
Nice work here!

[LynLee]

wow I LOVED THIS!!!!!!