Dear god

take what you will of a prayer i feel that we learn from others mistakes and sometimes its sad events like this

Dear God if i pray will you listen

will you do what is to be done

for i know you know more

and have more power then my gun

 

Dear god will you help me

my life seems to be broken

i know you have a plan

but this plan you have not spoken

 

dear god will you end this

put a stop to all the pain

will youu show me the way

show me everything i can gain

 

Dear god i hear theres a promise

is all of this true?

i hear so much from them

but nothing from you

 

dear god im breaking

my heart lays around

will you help me fix it

and pick the pieces off the ground

 

dear god you didnt answer

i made a mistake

i need your forgiveness

because my life i did take

 

Dear child i am listening

your apology is heard

your wrongs are forgiven

and your pain spread my word

 

 

Reviews

[Naomi Montana Walsh]

I think God is broken when we are..I mean we must awaken ourselves to understanding ..anyhow poetry is a great start, recheck this one some errors.

[SarahCortland]

Thank you I hope it is :)

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is very emotionally intense,
imaginative and even possibly controversial.
Nice!