Look at me

inspired by skillet's song last night or last time i cannot remember

you tell me you don't have a reason

then look at me

I'm here I'm staying

look at me

 

you tell me your done

then look at me

I care i'm here

look at me

 

your telling me goodbye

look at me

I won't let you go

look at me

 

You say your alone

then look at me

I won't ever leave

just look at me

 

you say you have no reason

look at me

I'll be your reason why

you can always look at me

 

Author's Note

i didn't copy the song i suggest listening to it. It made me cry i went and seen them live

Reviews

[Katie]

intense write! i love the last stanza especially. great job.

[Livana Lowell]

Ha, I just got into Skillet. All I have to say is listen to Emily and wow, that's so cool you went to see them live. I don't have much to say to be honest other than it's good and heartfelt.

[Senseless whatever]

Good write. Great emotional release of that goodby moment

[KatiePie]

This was intense! I'm so going to go listen to right now! I loved this. Beautiful work ^-^
-Cathrine

[Emily]

A nice piece. Remember that when you're tring to say "you + are" it is you're not your. Think that every grammatical error is one more person who doesn't read all the way through the piece to give you a comment at the end. Sharpen these works and keep yourself on task for cleaning them up so that they can become what they have the potential to be -- amazing and captivating to all audiences.

The emotions inthis piece are so hard to bear. The questions in our day to day lives about relationships and this and that about love are just too hard to bare somedays.

Well done.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

I can see the influence but you did the right thing and gave them credit.
I think you should try writing a song all on your own. You show a lot of promise.
This poem was nice.

[c.m.]

Well...it's very similar to the song. But good still.