I hate you too

end of friendship

you dont like me

I don't care

your just jealous

because i'm here and your there

 

just leave me alone

just don't say a word

I don't care to hear you

havent you heard

 

your not that important

you don't mean a thing

Its easy to dislike you

this feeling I don't care to contain.

 

Hatred it wrong

but I guess that doesn't matter

you didn't seem to care

my heart you can't tatter

 

you can go away now

you can leave me alone.

I don't care about you

I feel cold to the bone

 

yes you were my friend

yes i cared for you

but now you hate me

guess what I hate you too

 

Reviews

[kirstey Lost,Crushed,Co..]

Very nice :). We've all had that friend that we now hate so much lol

[Sabbath_Nikole]

Sounds a wee bit childish, but i like it. We have to experiance all these things.

[Kia-chan!]

Very expressive. I understand this feeling, because me and my friend recently got into a fight, and have been ignoring eachother ever since.

[*Always be Me:)*]

ooo aggresive....nice i ike it

[Wolfe Greytome]

raw emotion is always a great basis for writing....and this piece was no exception. A few minor grammatical errors that you would have no trouble catching if you decide to polish this piece a bit, but overall a good write.

[BELLA]

was that amed tword me grate job

[Senseless whatever]

Cool, angry write. Friendships lost are often the hardest to deal with. When things go bad they GO BAD. Great job

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Whoa. This is a very angry piece. Its sad to see things fall apart like this.

[ChristianM]

A little chaotic and at times I stopped because of the way you wrote certain sentences. Overall a nice write. Some typos but I'm sure you'll find them.

[Subjective Sanity]

Nice.