I'd do anything but it wouldn't matter

Trying so hard and realizing you still failed

I'd write you a letter I'd compose for you a song I'd do this all for you Though my heart feels wrong I'd tell you I loved you I'd say anything and all I'd take it all back Though you let me fall I'd let you in I'd forget your past I'd do anything you asked Though it wouldn't last I'd do anything at all I'd be there for you I'd try anything I could Though you gone and there's nothing I'd be able to do.

Author's Note

Ignore grammar ease because what you don't know is most ofmy poemsare wrote on my iPod touch at 10 or later so I'm tired plus these dumb things have minds of their own lol

Reviews

[GunMetal]

Lex Balaguer's review brings to mind a quote: "The goal isn’t to live forever, the goal is to create something that will." - Chuck Palahniuk

There have been many times (of course) where I've tried to the best of me to accomplish something, and still fail. But I feel that if you try your best, and you know, yes I tried my best, then you can still call that an accomplishment. Good write.

[J. Alexis Balaguer]

Perhaps, it would still matter. Existence doesn't matter, as long as we leave memories behind.

Good poem.
Alex

[C.J.G.]

absolutely wonderful. It's not too emotional in the sense that it is apparent you have given up. I feel what you're feeling. Great work.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

nice. I like the sense of resolve throughout.

[deeps]

I like this and enjoyed it.
very well written

[The Water Queen]

I love it and the message within its words. Great write.

[Fallacy Pharmacy]

I agree with Senseless whatever, this is an immense poem.

[Senseless whatever]

Another great write. You convey your thoughts so nicely here, sadness and finally the conclusion. Great job.

[Sunny]

wow i love it! it flowed and it kind of goes through the stages of that pulling force between that fantasy want and the reality of the matter. overall a good piece that i am adding to my library it truly touched me in many ways.

[Wolfe Greytome]

This is a terrific piece. You may want to take a look at your final line though, it almost feels like something is missing (if I am right, blame it on the technology =] ). Overall, this piece is very strong - well done.