Entrapped

Feeling scared and lost when you dig to make your ammends or fufil dreams

I'm locked away.
I'm cold I'm scared.
I followed my fears.
I am where no one has dared.

I'm alone, I'm searching
I'm so lost.
I can't hear a sound.
I see it wasn't worth the cost.

I'm closed in.
I'm fighting I'm unable to get out.
I can't see a thing.
I am filling with doubt.

I'm entrapped in a place.
I'm unable to breathe.
I am lost in my mind.
I am forever trapped and wanting to leave.

Reviews

[L.I. Black]

I must agree with lawrence, there's most certainly a sense of claustrophobia to it. It's very wonderful in the fact it translates to feelings, it's not always easy to make a readers heart speed up and make them want to claw their way out of an imaginary box, haha. Nicely done.

[Libby McKeown]

Simple, and yet so direct! Great job!

[Subjective Sanity]

Love it!

[deeps]

Such a deep emotional write.
I enjoyed this.

[Senseless whatever]

Marvelous write. Feelings of confusion and despair making decisions and wanting to go back but not knowing the hows. You do a great job of bringing these feelings to life. Great Job!

[Ashleyx]

Ooooh, i really liked this one, the flow was spot on and the rhythm was really catchy. i think it would make a really good song. :)

[ashley]

This is fantastic. Great write! :D

[ClosingAccount]

Deep! But Nice

[lawrence bear]

love this, made me feel claustrophobic.