I just wish

Someone I love is in the hospital needing a heart transplant and I had a dre am about him. He is 17 and I am so scared for him but at times I wish he'd stop caring for me because it hurts.

I wish you could see yourself. I wish you could see what's at hand. Your becoming like everyone else. I just wish you would understand. I wish you would grow up. I wish you would see. Your not only hurting yourself . I just wish you'd stop hurting me. I wish you could hold me. I wish that everything was okay. You know all the right words. I just wish you had something to say. I wish you could have known. I wish you would have said goodbye. You never knew it be the last. I just wish you hadn't had to die.

Reviews

[deeps]

I am so sorry, This is a wonderful write here, I agree with Tate
This is one of your best.

[Tate Morgan]

One of your better works

[Emily]

This is a nice piece. It is heartfelt in its dedication to your friend. Don't give up hope. There are so many miracles in the world that there is always hope.

This is well written and a very nice piece. Nice work!

[Keevan]

amazing. sorry that it wouldn't let me rate more than 100 ^_~

[Not Emily Just Em]

This is a really amazing poem. I've said it once and I'll say it again. You're an amazing poet.

[The Official Gary B]

Love it.. 100/100 ;)