A heartless world

Things that go on that can be stopped like abuse

 

Tears like the rain hit the ground

going unheard all around

blood like dirt upon the gravel

unable to escape no matter where you travel

a little boy broken inside and out

a little girl silent unable to shout

Their families so different but also the same

Their lives a mess tossed in a game

Tears like rain hit the ground

going unheard all around

blood like dirt upon the gravel

unable to escape no matter where you travel

A beautiful woman bruised and beaten

it's been many years since shes really eaten

such a talent within her beautiful soul

but her life is consumed and lies fill her full

Tears like rain hit the ground

going unheard all around

blood like dirt upon the gravel

unable to escape no matter where you travel

Three graves left alone

Our world left unaware of the angels' sad tone

Three lives that could have been saved

but nobody stepped off the path our heartless world paved

Author's Note

Ignore grammar again lol

Reviews

[TearsDontCompute]

This is great!

[The Water Queen]

Very strong emotional words. This is a great poem chock full of raw emotions.

[nightmask]

amazing rhyme scheme very lyrical! :]

[C.J.G.]

WOW! this is an awesome piece! i love the rhythm.

[Keevan]

amazing piece! i really liked how the rythem flowed out. nicely done :)

[kirstey Lost,Crushed,Co..]

omg O_O...this is amazing :O...such a good write!, keep writting :D

Wow, this is beautiful. I like it, though it's incredibly sad...all in all a vivid portrayel of how our world can be