In a time of Hatred

In a time of Hatred

A Poem by SarahCortland
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Fighting with a friend

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In a time of Hatred

In a time of fear

you left me unprotected

you left me right here

Alone and shaking

unable to fight

scared and tired.

Everything wrong and nothing right.

In a time of hatred

In a time of fear

you allowed me to cower

You chose not to hear.

Tired and helpless

you left me to fend.

No one by my side

only hope for the end

In a time of hatred

in a time of fear

you were my enemy

you fought me here.

© 2010 SarahCortland


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This is very emotional. I love how you accuse the the other person of never being there and that they are your enemy. Its a great, and simply stunning poem.

Posted 14 Years Ago


simple but hits like a wrecking ball. I love this poem. You wrote on so many levels at one time. This poem is truly something to be proud of. No flash..no explosions or gadgets. It's simply great writing. Bravo.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Outstanding write. Great flow, perfect timing. Love this one.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I liked this I thought it was very well written

Posted 14 Years Ago


this reminds me of my cousin...... good write

Posted 14 Years Ago


I liked it keep going you really getting good at this

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on April 14, 2010
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Tags: end of friendships

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SarahCortland
SarahCortland

Owensboro, KY



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My name is Myspace Layouts. I love to Write poetry and I am currently working on one book. Sometimes I write short stories but Poetry is what i like to Stick to. Confidence Quotes .. more..

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