Doesn't mean there isn't a forever.

Sometimes we have to love whats best for us. In the end we see that it will be okay.

I wanted you to love me
I wanted you to understand
I wanted you to see
I wanted you to hold my hand

Broken hearts take us far
Friends hold us together
Love leaves a scar
And there is no forever

I needed you to say you loved me
I needed to know you cared
I needed to be free
I needed my heart to be spared

Broken hearts take us far
Friends hold us together
Love leaves a scar
And there is no forever

I told you that I need you
I let you know it all
I told you all thats true
I begged you and you let me fall

Broken hearts take us far
Friends hold us together
Love leaves a scar
And there is no forever

I promised myself I wouldn't cry
I promised everyone I'd be well
I promised them all I would try
I broke all those promises and I fell

Broken hearts take us far
Friends hold us together
Love leaves a scar
And there is no forever

I saw that he loved me
I saw he could understand
I saw he could help me heal
I saw he would hold my hand

Broken hearts take us far
Friends hold us together
Love leaves a scar
doesn't mean there isn't a forever

Reviews

[Livana Lowell]

For some reason, I hear a melody within these lines. Blah, anyways, I think this is absolutely kawaii yet sad and true at the same time. Wonderful write. I see the pattern between repetition and it's adorable, flowling finely. I complment you for sharing this lovely write.

P.S. Kawaii just means cute in japanese.

[C.J.G.]

A beautifully horrible love story. This is amazing.

[J. Alexis Balaguer]

How very lyrical. This to me is a song.

My favorite lines:
Broken hearts take us far
Friends hold us together

- That's truth right there. Wonderful poem!
Simple. I like it.

Keep writing,
Alex

[Sabbath_Nikole]

Very sweet, interesting how you've changed the last line of your repeating stanza, you end up hopeful towards the end. I like it.

[karmic]

I agree with Deaths cold kiss, this sounds like a sad but beautiful song. Great piece.

[glamourgurl]

fabulous loveorhate

[kirstey Lost,Crushed,Co..]

omg this is amazing :D

[MoonlitAngel]

Aww. It's so sad.:(

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

this sounds like a song. its sad, but, i really like this. and i agree with you

[Tate Morgan]

Advice Want less Need less and you will be happier to find those things within yourself