Alone

At the front of the crowd
Tartly, looking around.
there are many faces in the cobweb.
All looking passed out.
I scream out to the silence, only to hear
my words come out.

Which sound shall I make today
To be noticeable
I have Failed At the front of squirter
My voice is no longer my shield or weapon
No one acknowledges my presence.
Its painful being alone in a crowd

Won by laughing, lost and weeping .
Everyone gone
I saw that there was nothing left.
Accumulated desires falling,
Firmly into the soil

Author's Note

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Reviews

[barleygirl]

You have expressed a number of interesting & true-to-life observations here, but as a whole, I'm not following the flow of ideas. It feels like a scattering of statements about how being alone in a crowd feels, but I don't understand the final couplet to be a culmination of all these ideas. The best part of your writing is that everything is originally stated, even when the ideas are familiar & relatable.

[Mansu vml]

Its abt somebody who isnt appreciated for his work or who is rejected by all...who is unnoticed by any...who feel so lonely in this world

[Mansu vml]

Thanks..thumbs up

[Farha Nayamee]

well done with the poem....good work....

[Mansu vml]

Farha 😎 thanks

[tanmay7551]

Everything that suggests here is a depiction of a isolated soul gripped with sorrows and feelings that pour within not letting one to mingle with the crowd.

Thanks for sharing.

[horizon]

I really loved the line feels painful to be alone in crowd

[Marina]

Accurate depiction of the painful situation many people find themselves in. Trying to be 'you' amidst a shapeless mass of people has become a bigger challenge now more than ever.
Okay, enough with the philosophical rant- I really liked this one ;)

[Mansu vml]

Thanks marina. Thumbs up