I still remember

yeah 4 year ago today was the first time we met...

I still remember the day that you told me for the first time you loved me.
I love you more than you can even dream of.

Somehow, we did something wrong....
i hate those times i hurt you…
I can't argue with it again
Friends keep telling me that
life goes on..
I can act fine., I can smile..
You never off on my mind and
I miss you so much

It's true
I want you today for the rest of my life.
I love every time that we spent together
I can't explain it
I love those time you took me somewhere

I can say apologies you have already heard
Nothing else I have to say now
I wish you were mine again..
Let me get what I want..

Reviews

[Anindita Janhabee]

Sometimes, decisions made are wrong....
Sometimes, god doesn't judge well...
Sometimes, world goes really unfair...
Each bit here, when describes such emotions.... I get ... like..... speechless ....
i could relate this, but let me tell u, life goes on no doubt but every person should be thankful to all that had happened to him which makes him reach where he is now.....
all that u r now, is for that thing...
hold it as ur previous memory...
true love never dies, no matter how far you are, she'll always be in u, close to ur heart........

Secondly, out of all your writings, I loved the one "I'm sorry"
That made me too much emotional, and I just dnt know what to tell abt that... just a word - Heart touching........... nd speechless.........

Life is short, smile everyday, even of not for yourself, for others atleast.....

Anindita....

[Mansu vml]

Thanks anindita.. thumbs up

[Anindita Janhabee]

my pleasure...

[SZHZIA]

A nice piece on love filled with your true emotions and feelings that you have for most special person in the depth of your heart. Every lines of this poem is reflection of this truth. but we must keep in mind, the real meaning of love does not mean to be with that person always because if he/she feel happy maintaining distance from you. Let her/him do it. the true meaning of love is to give happiness to the lovers or beloved. Do not tell to love a person, who does not have respect for your feelings and does not want to understand. Overall it is a nice emotional poem. Thanks for sharing.

Best
szhzia

[Miss Sharon]

Sorry about this my friend. Time will help a bit and I just know in my heart you find a wonderful person to share your life with. Writing out the pain is therapeutic so keep writing. ~Sharon

[Cobblestone Traveler]

The ache comes through, and I can feel it with intensity. The overwhelming anguish that comes with coping after lost love. Excellent job.

[YanZeros]

A big chunk of heart has taken by the heartless thief! haha this phrase just comes out into mind. Just want you to know that you're not alone. Very well written Sam.d :)

[Mansu vml]

Thank you.. :) thumbs up

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Sometimes we do things in our lives which are irreversible.. We wish times could change, that we could get what we want.. But life goes on.. You portray the emotions well. Nice reading it....

[Mansu vml]

Thanks for your encouragement.. thumbs up :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You are welcome! My pleasure ☺

[tanmay7551]

Wonderful! Very well written.

Time never waits and some people when lost in our life may never return but yes, for sure we have many more exciting things coming soon in our life that we may never guess!

So, keep living and let the destiny guide you further in life with good or bad either side you win! Either you enjoy the good or you learn from the bad to get the good.

[Mansu vml]

Thank you man.. thumbs up :)

[Tashida]

This was so sad and yet so true :) your emotions were clearly conveyed I lived it. Great job!

[Mansu vml]

Thumbs up..

[Jack Necron (Aubrey Jac..]

Easily connectable and brings back memories from both the good and bad times I've lived. The emotion is strong throughout and speaks to the reader almost instantly. We all have things we wish we could take back or desire another chance at, but that's part of what makes us human. Thanks for sharing.

[Mansu vml]

Thanks for reviewing. Nd encouragement.. thumbs up dear :)

[Sira YR]

This poem really speaks to me. I've done a lot of things in my life that I regret and that i wish that i can undo, but in reality I cannot...this poem clearly captures how i feel about those bad things that i have done in life. Thank you for posting it!