"I'm all alone,without you my love"

An empty heart.. im all alone..
you left..
beacuse of me..
cause of my fault.
Am all alone.. Without you my love
Where are you....

I remember..The days we had...
the song you sang

Am all alone without you my love..
So i say little prayers..
Reaching for my love that seems so far
And hope my dreams will take me there.
give me another chance to reach me there.

Reviews

[Anindita Janhabee]

I could relate the pain and desires here...
God's strange and so is the world...
Sometimes love is there yet invisible... other times, love is visible but it doesn't really exist....
A fine ranting of a lonely heart shown here........
Keep it up!!👍
proud to see you Indians so talented and gentle........... 👏
Anindita

[SZHZIA]

Another lovely emotional poem based on experience and observation of life. It is heart-touching. But do not regret that you reached to this condition because of your fault. there is no fault in love. nice job.

Thanks for sharing. keep writing.

best
szhzia

[Jack Necron (Aubrey Jac..]

A connectable write, something many of us have no doubt felt at one point in time. This is touching and also sorrowing to read, it's real and you can sense this was written from somewhere deep within. Thank you for sharing.

[Tashida]

Once again, this was such an beautiful, deep, yet truly sad poem. From the first line, I was sucked into a vortex of regret, remorse, sadness.

So beautiful, so deep. Loved it!

[Roselyn Rose]

Such an amazing and touching poem, i can feel the regret and sadness. Well done my friend

[Mansu vml]

Thanks for your encouragement...thumbs up

[Roselyn Rose]

you are most welcome Sam :D

[Hebe]

lovely poetry simple and touching hearts

[Mansu vml]

Thank you so much

[Hebe]

lovely poetry simple and touch8ng

[Coyote Poetry]

Rare second chances.
"And hope my dreams will take me there.
give me another chance to reach me there."
Wishes become regret. Regret become lessons. Thank you Sam for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Mansu vml]

Of course..Wishes become regret. Regret become lessons.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree with your thoughts and logic.

[Sheila Kline]

It's such a lonely feeling without the one you love, and to know one has a part in the separation makes it hurt even more. You have expressed to the reader this emotion of loss in a way that touches the heart!

[Mansu vml]

Thank you for your valuable review..thumbs up